— That’s enough, Larisa Pavlovna! The apartment isn’t yours, and your son isn’t a slave. Take him and get out! No one is going to put up with you anymore!”
Victoria held the key in her hand—small, metallic, yet heavy with the weight of an entire life. As if it weren’t a key at all, but a medal for survival in a strange discipline called “five years without joy.” The cold, prickly metal burned her fingers—not from the February frost, but from the realization of everything it contained: every morning without takeaway coffee, every winter in old boots, every “no” she’d told herself to little things like a movie ticket or a bun at the station after a night shift. All for these forty and a half square meters on the outskirts—mold in the bathroom and a view of an endless line of cars. But they were hers. Belonging to no one but her.
“Vika!” Olga called from the doorway, shifting from foot to foot. In one hand she held a cake; in the other, sincere impatience. In her eyes burned that particular female fire that flares up at weddings or in the clearance aisle. “What are you doing in there—like you’re about to walk down the aisle? Come on, open up already!”
They’d known each other since the days they sewed doll dresses from old socks, and their first kiss wasn’t about feelings—it was about curiosity and a chemistry lesson. Their chests had grown up, their taste in men had—let’s say—gone downhill, and their friendship, even when it sometimes felt like a heavy suitcase without wheels, still kept getting dragged forward. You don’t just abandon it.
“Just a second,” Victoria said, taking a deep breath like before jumping into cold water. The key clicked in the lock, and the door gave way reluctantly.
Inside were bare walls, linoleum the color of overfried herring, and stains on the ceiling as if it had rained right in the entryway. But Victoria was smiling—wide, all the way to the corners of her soul.
“Happy housewarming, my friend!” Olga burst in like a hurricane and began inspecting the “property.” “There’s work to do here, of course…”
“But everything will be my way,” Victoria said, shrugging off her coat as if shedding the past. “And no mother-in-law will tell me where to put a vase.”
They started the renovation with laughter—stupid jokes and buckets of paint, like in their student days. Olga, dropping the roller, painted the bedroom walls; Victoria battled the kitchen tile. Music blared—somewhere between Zemfira and Nautilus—and the apartment smelled of fresh paint, dumplings, and hope.
“Can you imagine what the housewarming will be like?” Victoria daydreamed, stirring paint like a potion.
“With cake and pretty dishes!” Olga called from the step ladder. “And a set of china for special occasions. Meaning every day—because every day is a special occasion.”
They bought furniture as if they were curating a museum: a solid-wood table, a handwoven rug, a lotus-shaped lamp. And Olga, without asking, hauled in a massive mirror.
“So you’ll remember you’re beautiful,” she said. “Even hungover.”
Three months later, the renovation was finished. Exhausted, in old T-shirts, but with the feeling they’d done something truly important, they celebrated. That was when Victoria met Andrey—tall, with an advertising-perfect smile and a voice like late-night radio. He asked where the outlet was and poured her some wine. Two months later they were dating. A year and a half later he proposed.
The wedding was quiet and tasteful. No ridiculous contests—just live music and a cake from Olga.
“So, now you’re a wife,” Olga whispered in the ladies’ room, adjusting the veil. “All that’s left is learning to say ‘darling’ without grinding your teeth.”
“I’m happy,” Victoria said. “And Andrey respects my independence.”
The first months were like a fairy tale. Andrey moved in, adapted to her routines, even lined up his slippers in the corner the way she liked. But soon Larisa Pavlovna appeared in their lives—Andrey’s mother. A woman with a flawless smile and a gaze as sharp as a blade.
At first she brought pastries. Then advice. And then comments like:
“Such a cute little apartment… for one person. Or two. But you’re thinking about the future, right?”
Victoria, raised not to argue with elders, replied gently:
“We’re not planning children yet, Larisa Pavlovna.”
But Larisa Pavlovna heard only one word: “yet.” Which meant there was hope.
And then it began… Every Sunday wasn’t just lunch—it was a small battle, where not only dishes were placed on the table, but plans, proposals, hints that eventually stopped being hints.
“Maybe you should sell this little apartment?” Larisa Pavlovna suggested with a sweet smile, as if casually. “And with Andrey—get a little house outside the city?”
She built entire castles in the air, and it seemed there wasn’t even a place for Victoria in them.
“Andrey,” Vika whispered one evening as they sat together on the couch. “Don’t you see your mother is getting way too involved?”
“She’s just caring, Vika. Don’t take it so personally.”
But her heart, as always, lived by its own rules—pounding, stopping, trembling at every barbed remark. Especially when, behind her back, they were “discussing” what was hers—her only real possession.
The final blow was close.
The morning was quiet, except for a dull clink in the kitchen. A cup slipped from Andrey’s hands, shattered, and coffee spread into a dark stain—and there was something symbolic about it. He silently grabbed a rag and started wiping. Vika watched as if he’d broken not porcelain, but something inside her.
“Did you talk to your mom?” she asked evenly, almost softly.
Andrey froze, wrung out the rag.
“I can’t talk to her like that… she’s my mother.”
“And who am I? An open-door policy? A button on the intercom you don’t have to answer?”
She moved in slowly, like an experienced surgeon approaching a wound.
“You’re discussing selling my apartment behind my back. You’ve already found a house. You’ve already decided where my money will go. All of it—without me.”
“I thought you’d understand later. It’s for us…” he mumbled.
“No, Andryusha. It’s for you. And for her. In those conversations, I’m a donor. A walking wallet. Convenient.”
A flash of anger crossed his eyes.
“You’re acting hysterical. It was just a discussion.”
“Without me? Without my consent? That’s ‘just a discussion’ to you? Was our wedding also ‘just a discussion’?”
He clenched his fists.
“Don’t dramatize. No one was going to rob you. Mom just…”
“Mom just wants my kitchen, my walls, my floor. And you just gave her permission to discuss it. You know she doesn’t like me. Never has.”
“She’s just different. She has her own views…”
“She thinks I’m temporary!” Vika jerked back. “A temporary accessory. Today it’s me, tomorrow it’s someone more convenient—with a bigger kitchen and Mom included.”
“You’re twisting everything! She wants to help!” Andrey was nearly shouting.
“Help? Like when she says: ‘Are you a man or not? Or will you spend your whole life sitting in the little box your wife allotted you?’”
At that moment, the door flew open.
“So, you’re fighting again?” Larisa Pavlovna stood in the doorway in her ever-present cap, wearing the expression of a village neighbor staring at an unweeded garden.
“We’re talking, Mom,” Andrey answered wearily.
“Talking? She’s shouting and you’re standing there like a rag. Where’s your backbone, son?”
“It’s in the same place as my kitchen,” Victoria replied calmly. “But you’re trying to break it.”
“I don’t understand one thing,” Larisa Pavlovna sat at the table, pursing her lips. “Why are you clinging to this little apartment so much? So your grandkids can stand in line for the toilet?”
“I’m fine with having my own place,” Victoria said. “And my own toilet.”
“That’s greed,” Larisa Pavlovna declared. “You want everything to be yours. That’s not how families work.”
Victoria took a calm sip of water.
“In a family, many things happen, Larisa Pavlovna—love, respect, trust. But there shouldn’t be a war over territory.”
Larisa Pavlovna narrowed her eyes.
“Look how smart you’ve gotten. Probably you and your friend come up with scripts together. I’ll tell you something: you have nothing sacred. No children, no patience, no understanding of how to be a woman.”
Victoria stood and moved closer to the table. Her palm came down—not hard, but loud—on the wooden surface.
“I am a woman,” she said calmly, stating the obvious. “And you know what a woman does when she’s being pressured? First she endures. Then she stays silent. And then she starts to act.”
“Is that a threat?” Larisa Pavlovna raised an eyebrow.
“It’s a warning.”
And then Andrey snapped, as if he’d been waiting for the moment to spill everything he’d been holding in.
“Enough!” he yelled. “You’re both driving me insane! Two witches! One bosses me around, the other plays the victim! I’m tired! I don’t even know why I got married!
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